All article writers not just this one use a very long sentence structure. This one would have a leg up on all the others if it did this one thing. The Hemingway editor says to use 14 words maximum. Most of the time I get a 30 word sentence that I have to chop up. A lot of times to all notice that the article writers will reiterate a lot. It will write it in one line and on the next line they will say it in a different way. Kind of like what I just did on those two sentences before lol. Thanks for my rant session ;)